THE VARIETY SHOW REFLECTION
I enjoyed watching the movie Hotel for dogs, Smurf 2 and Rio 2 and I enjoyed playing outside with my friends.
I learnt to use my voice loudly on important times and I learnt how to be quiet till the show.
I had just 1 problem was that I was so mad that no one was listening to me.
I solved the problem by repeating myself once or twice.
If I could change something it might be the song to Watch me whip or something else which I would like and I would change to be a dancer not a singer( I think I was terribly singing because I think I wasn't loud enough ).
Hi Katsuki I really like how you presented this work about the variety show.My favorite thing about it was when you used lots of adjectives,just next time i think you should change the colour of the words because it doesn't really suit it .Just one thing how did you come up with all these good ideas?
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